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years since i last said sunny side up
years by tom clausen
01 Friday Dec 2023
Posted in americana, autumn, close up details, Dim Sum, haiku, photos, poems and photos, Published Poems
tom clausen 
I like the one-line version better than the 3 lines. Seems more immediate somehow – I couldn’t see where the poem was going ( and had no time to ponder at the end of each line) until I got to the last 3 words. Well done!