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going the same way…
exchanging looks with the driver
of the hearse
autumn field-
the vitamin slowly dissolves
in my mouth
Modern Haiku vol. XXVI no.2 Summer, 1995
20 Monday Jun 2022
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going the same way…
exchanging looks with the driver
of the hearse
autumn field-
the vitamin slowly dissolves
in my mouth
Modern Haiku vol. XXVI no.2 Summer, 1995
18 Saturday Jun 2022
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Also living in New York state, but tending to write haiku about more cheerful, domestic scenes, is Tom Clausen. Though he treats the ups and downs of marriage and being a parent, his experience seems to have been that the ups seem to make up for the downs. He first learned of haiku in the early 1980s when a friend gave him the “Autumn” book of R.H. Blyth’s four-volume Haiku. Though he was interested, he did not seriously take up the genre until 1988, after he read an article about Ruth Yarrow, who was then living in Ithaca, N.Y.
Clausen has lived almost all his life in Ithaca. He was born there on August 1, 1951, and lives there now, in his childhood home with his wife and two children (and two cats). He writes that his parents encouraged him to keep a journal at a very young age. By the time he went to college he was “well into the habit of writing to record experiences and to find expression for thoughts and feelings in solitude.” After college (Cornell University, 1973) he took a series of bicycle trips in North and Central America and helped develop his literary skills by writing letters about his experiences on the road. By 1980 he had begun to write what he “hoped were poems.”
Many of Clausen’s haiku are about his family and his relationships with his children and his wife. This emphasis may show Yarrow’s influence on his work. Here is a senryu about his daughter and another about his wife and cat, which presumably refers to something the poet has said (or it could be understood as a small child mimicking an adult):
after speaking importantly
she quickly resumes
sucking her thumbto the cat
“that’s complete and
utter nonsense”
Clausen writes,
Haiku has consistently appealed to me as a means of centering, focusing, sharing, and responding to a life and world bent on excess. As the layers of my own life have accumulated, I’ve often felt overwhelmed by both personal changes and the mass of news, information, and survival requirements that come with being human these days. Haiku are for me a means of honoring and celebrating simple yet profound relationships that awaken in us, with a gentle and silent inner touch, a spiritual relevance that adds meaning to our lives.
He, too, has practiced Zen meditation and looks on haiku as a tool for “spiritual tuning and guidance, shining light on the way we go.”
Clausen joined the Haiku Society of America and Haiku Canada in 1988. He sometimes attends HSA meetings in New York City where he has had contact with such poets as Stevenson, Dee Evetts, and L.A. Davidson. He has self-published three small chapbooks of his haiku, in 1994, 1995, and 1998. A collection of his tanka, A Work of Love, was published in 1997 by Tiny Poems Press. In 2000 Snapshot Press in England published Homework, a book of his haiku. It was a small collection about, once again, family life. Clausen also writes haiku with a more traditional focus on nature. Here are two: the first one has a very strong sense of sabi and the second shows a bonding with the world of wild nature—and more sabi.
twilight
the only car ahead
turns offsnow flurrying . . .
the deer, one by one, look back
before they vanish
excerpt from an essay in Modern Haiku- “American Haiku’s Future” by Cor van den Heuvel
Modern Haiku v. 34: no.3 2003 Autumn
06 Monday Jun 2022
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| Book review by Tom Clausen in Modern Haiku vol. 34, no. 1 Winter-Spring 2003 finding the way: haiku and field notes by paul m. (Foster City, Calif.: Press Here, 2002). 56 poems, 4 field notes. Introduction by the author. 4″ x 5.5″, saddle-stitched, with a heavy illustrated wrapper. ISBN 1-878798-25-1. $6.00 postpaid in the United States, or $7.00 elsewhere, from Press Here, P.O. Box 3339, Redmond, WA 98073-3339 (please make checks or international money orders payable to “Michael D. Welch”). |
| “Finding the way” is a wonderfully apt title for a collection of haiku, and in this collection, paul m.’s first, you will find the pleasure and serendipity of a well-chosen path. The author has been writing since 1988, with many of his haiku winning awards and recognition for their clarity and gentle reach. Press Here publisher Michael D. Welch states about this collection “A serenity of quiet confidence marks these poems, a serenity of having found the haiku way.” In an insightful introduction paul notes that haiku “of all poetry seems to most closely examine the light that connects us with the seemingly disparate, the intimate details of our lives and surroundings, the echo of one thing upon another.” Although finding the way is replete with haiku values and aesthetics, I feel that what gives this collection a distinguished signature is its use of this “echo.” Throughout this beautifully produced book are haiku that demonstrate how a reverberation between two images with one working against (or with) another enhances both. For example falling leaves the rusty wheelbarrow heavy with stones• ** ** that chipmunk again river sunlight skipping leaf to leaf ** ** There is much to delight in this collection as you discover how finely and carefully paul presents the “coming to”—a clear intuition of what it is that speaks to us in a haiku way. There is a strength to the evenness and consistency in the tone of these haiku. There are keen perceptions and thoughtful relationships that unfold slowly in the consciousness at just the right speed. Many of the haiku appear to be from hikes on trails and what was found off or beyond these trails. unpacking the map— a mountain spring crosses the trail• ** ** cold wind on the granite slope marmot scat One feature in finding the way that seemed slightly disconnected from the strength of the body of haiku contained are the four field notes which are distributed throughout the collection. These are brief prose passages detailing paul’s mindset on the trail about the trail. Although the field notes certainly do not detract from the superb quality of this collection, I personally did not feel that they added significantly to what is conveyed marvelously by the haiku themselves. With extraordinary quality to the paper, design, and presentation, this collection of haiku invites repeat visits for solace and inspiration. At $5.00 this is an exceptional book of haiku to add to your haiku library or give as a special gift. Relatively small in size, finding the way is a book you can easily carry along to a favorite reflective place to savor the way these haiku will find you, finding the way. A personal favorite in closing: uphill trail the scarred trunk of a giant sequoia |
06 Monday Jun 2022
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on the wall Jesus on the cross above her side of the bed Modern Haiku vol. XXXII no..1 Winter-Spring, 2001
06 Monday Jun 2022
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“phoebe, phoebe”
my father used to
answer
alone
corking
the empty bottle
Modern Haiku vol. 35 no. 3 Autumn 2004
05 Sunday Jun 2022
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hospice window-
in and out of view
the cardinal
Modern Haiku v. 33: no.3 Autumn 2002
04 Saturday Jun 2022
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longer than my break
the spring sun
holds me
honeybees
living in the wall –
the realtor’s frown
the parking lot full
of glittering chrome
Custer’s Battlefield
after the party
undressing
myself
Modern Haiku vol. XXIV, no.3 Fall, 1993
04 Saturday Jun 2022
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side by side
answering nature’s call
man and dog
Modern Haiku vol. XXXII, no. 3 Fall , 2001
03 Friday Jun 2022
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the formal garden-
a cabbage butterfly’s
whimsy
Modern Haiku vol. XXIV, no.2 Summer, 1993
01 Wednesday Jun 2022
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the young pirate points
‘there!’- on the crayon-colored
treasure map
Popeye…
our four-year old with zeal
eats his greens
Modern Haiku v. XXIII, no.3 Fall, 1992