a new day
the chance to make peace
with myself
peace by tom clausen
29 Sunday Oct 2023
Posted in A Work of Love, americana, autumn, close up details, haiku, Ithaca, leaves, nature, paths, plants, poems and photos, Published Poems
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May i respectfully suggest a ‘the’ at the start of L2. Would enhance the poem no end IMHO.
Grateful thanks for your thoughtful suggestion… I just edited it to add ‘the’ and agree it reads much better this way. Your attention to this is much appreciated.